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Wrath of Makombo: part 11Later that evening, Canterlot was almost done with all the repairs needed.
Down in the castle dungeon (Canterlot's prison), Makombo just sat on an uncomforable bed in his cell. He could not use his powers to break free because their was a force field around prison that prevented any magic or anything like magic to make a break-out.
The Weasel then noticed at his window that the bars were actually wide enough for a Weasel to slide through. And he did so. He snuck out of Canterlot, unseen in the shadows of the night. He then noticed something happening a high mountain about a mile from the city. It was noticable because there was something big happening on the top.
On the high mountain's top, Goliath the Roc was eating a Mountain Goat corpse. "What have I reduced myself too?" the great Bird asked himself, "No true home. Hideous eyes I now have. And Finding any convient prey just to survive"
As soon as he was done, he took to the wing. As he flew across the night sky, Goliath spotted a st
Wrath of Makombo: part 10"Brace yourselves!", commanded Twilight to the rest of the group, "Take avasive actions!"
But strangely, the two Utahraptors and one Spinosaurus did not attack, all they did was look around and cock their heads, confused as to what kind of world this is (not knowing that they had been brought to the future). The portal through time immidiately warped the three carnivores back in and shut down.
"Curses!" snapped Makombo, "Why does time travel have to be temporary?"
He then began to open another portal that went back even further in time, to a time when Dinosaurs did not exist yet, the Permian period. Out of the portal emerged a four-legged predatory Reptile-like Creature. It a long snout with a pair of 4 inch saber teeth. It also had no fur at all. It basically looked like a hariless, saber-tootherd Reptile-like Wolf.
"Is that another Dinosaur?" asked Pinkie.
"No", said Twilight, instantly recognizing its species, "It's not a Reptile neither. It's a close cousin to Mammals. A Gorgonops.
Wrath of Makombo: part 9After the 9 beings rounded up a bunch of Blueberries and Strawberries, they then began to wonder how the Monkeys could be lured by them instantly.
"How are we gonna get them Monkeys to come swarmin' out of the city?" asked Applejack.
"They sure will like these berries", said the voice of Pinkie Pie, sounding as if she was eating something. To the group's shock, she was eating the Strawberries and Blueberries they had all collected. "I sure love them!" she said happily after licking the juice off her lips.
"That does it!" snapped Rainbow Dash, jumping into the air and charging as fast as she could fly right through the main gate, leaving a big hole in the wooden gate. The others followed her only by opening the gate.
Everything in Canterlot was wrecked and fire burned almost everywhere. The Canterlot Ponies were rushing around in fear while the Marmosets continued to laugh at them as they tormented.
"Anyone order a little kick-butt!" shouted Rainbow.
"Get them!" shouted the alpha male a
Wrath of Makombo: part 8As soon as the group of 9 reached the walls of Canterlot, they discovered the flames shooting up from the other side, within the city's walls.
"This is not good at all", said Twilight, feeling quite sad, my home city...ruined..."
Griffy sniffed the soil and recognized the scent he got. "I smell a Weasel behind all of this"
"Isn't there always?" asked Rarity.
"No, I smell a Weasel, litteraly", said Griffy, "And I think I know this one...MAKOMBO!! He's from my home area, Gabbagon. I know him by reputation only"
"I smell Primates, too", added Spike, sniffing the ground, "It smells like that same troop of Marmosets that attacked Ponyville, remember them?"
"So two enemies have united", said Rainbow Dash, "Time to give them a free sample of my hoof in their butts! It'll be a buffe table of pain for them!"
"That sounds rather dangerous", mumbled Fluttershy, feeling scared of the great activity happening within the walls.
"Looks like we might coax the Monkeys out with fruit", said Griffy, "C'm
Wrath of Makombo: part 7Makombo passed back and forth across the conference table, furious at the fact that his hypnotism had no effect on the Alicorns. Celestia and Luna stared at him awkwardly. He then jumped off the table lept over to a window and opened it up. He then shouted out a signal to the Marmosets to officially attack the city. "IT BE TIME!!!" He shouted.
The Monkeys then plundered the whole city of Canterlot, giving Ponies noogies and rear-kicks. They used battering rams made from logs to break down doors and chased some of the residents while swinging wooden boards with nails in them around in the air.
Pretty soon, the whole city was on fire with houses crashing down and everything. The high-class Ponies ran in panic while the Monkeys caused more chaos and misery.
Makombo used his mind powers to warp Smarty Pants into his grasp. He turned to the royal sisters and said, "Terror-Fiend and I shall rule the country!"
Immidiately, Celestia and Luna used their combined powers to contact the 8 heroes f
Wrath of Makombo: part 6Hypnotized by the Weasel's abilities, the snobby couple was then ordered by Makombo to go the local instrument store and by all the exotic instruments from other areas of the country and the world so that he could sound even more hypnotic.
He waited in the Canterlot park for a few minutes, sitting on a bench, until he finally spotted the two hypnotized high-class Ponies approaching him, dragging large sacks strapped to their sides.
"What can I get out of here?" he said as he dug through the instruments in the two big sacks. He chose a kalimba, a pair of maracas, a gong, a ukulele, a panflute, a xylophone and an accordion. "I'll use them all one by one"
He then made a chirp-like squeel from his throat, signaling the Marmosets to swarm the city of Canterlot. Pretty soon, the huge troop of little Monkeys was everywhere; but not in a chaotic way, but in secret. They were snatching things from the local Ponies pockets while they were not looking.
Makombo got back to his hypnosis duties and
Wrath of Makombo: part 5As Makombo lead the Monkeys out of the forest and out onto the open fields of the Pony-controlled range of Equestria, he held Smarty Pants in a backpack, made from Rubber Tree sap, on his back.
They all suddenly heard some sort of commotion coming from nearby. "Stay low", whispered the old Weasel to the Marmosets. He then cast a new spell, turning them all invisible.
They all then spotted what was going on, Rarity was approaching with Spike and Griffy following in behind. She was taking them to a certain field, for she had not yet explained to some of those rich Canterlot Ponies that Griffy and Spike are not really Ponies.
They spotted that snobby married couple of rich Cantelot Ponies up ahead. Rarity immediately activated her species-change spell and turned both Spike and Griffy into Ponies. Spike was a Unicorn Pony and Griffy was a Pegasus Pony.
"Might we both ask what had gotten into you?" questioned Griffy.
"What gives?" asked Spike, "Why did you make us Ponies?"
Rarity saw the sn
Wrath of Makombo: part 4Makombo stormed through the tangled undergrowth of the forest, far from Gabbagon by now. He then haulted and dropped Smarty Pants from his teeth.
"If I cannot take over Gabbagon", said the Weasel to the Pony doll, "Then maybe the rest of the country, outside of the Everfree Forest, shall be conquered. For those Ponies look easy to hypnotize. Eh, Terror-Fiend?"
He then began to hear the sound of music coming from a short distance away. He dragged Smarty Pants along with him to go investigate. Once he peeked through some dense bushes, he spotted the marauding Marmoset troop, that troop that goes around the Everfree Forest and trying to take over. They were all just dancing around to the sound of the durm-like rhythym they were making while pounding on coconuts.
The music stopped as soon as Makombo stepped into the clearing. "Hello, Common Marmosets", he said to them, "Been a long time since any Gabbagonian, such as myself, has seen you all after you attempted to take over Gabbagon"
Wrath of Makombo: part 3It was during the afternoon, Gabbagon was still having ordinary activities going on throughout it. Perched on the branch of an Oak Tree was a female Cardinal looking quite sad. It was Kweela, one of Griffy's old friends, she was looking quite down on the fact that Griffalonius Von Masterton III (AKA Griffy) was still banished from Gabbagon.
"Me and Nilmerg met him and his new friends outside of the Everfree Forest for the Tamaule'a last year", she said to herself out loud, "But things still aren't the same without him. *sigh* if only he were here to help out with the current situation"
Suddenly, Nilmerg the male Common Tree Gremlin flew up to the branch Kweela was perched on. "Okay Kweela. You'll never believe this, the kiongaka'i is blaming Ponies for everything that has gone wrong in the past"
"Really?" asked Kweela, still looking depressed.
"I know", sighed Nilmerg, "I miss Griff, too. But we could still get this job done together"
The two then flew toward the Grand Council Boulder:
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