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Kurayami's Revenge: Chapter 3

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Meanwhile, in the dark realm of Kurayami, Skull-Crusher was in what looked like an arena, sharpening his hooves on the tile floor. He was getting ready for battle-training. The huge, dark red-colored, Bat-like musculine Demon named Zortna flew flew down near Skull-Crusher to give him some tips.

"Your first challenge", said the Bat-like Demon, "Battling undead prehistoric Animals"

And then, out of the shadows, came a Tyrannosaurus zombie, its skin color all pale from decomposition and its feathers all rotten looking, joined by a Steppe Mammoth zombie, its tusk all scared and some of its brown fur flaking off.

"Come and get some, you undead extinct beasts!", shouted Skull-Crusher ferociously at the two undead corpses and charged straight for them, using his wings to move quicker. He instantly knocked down the zombie Mammoth in one swoop, but he then got wacked by a swing from the zombie T-Rex's tail. He flew straight at its snout, used all his strength and caused the unstable zombie Dinosaur to fall down.

"Excellent", snickered Zortna, flying over to the Pegasus Pony, "But your training is not over yet, mortal"







Back in the mortal realm, Eric and Derpy took Ponyville's whole population of Ponies and non-Ponies into the building where the Summer Sun Celebration is held and began to tell Eric's tale.

"I om the last of a noble Pony race known os the Mighty Obeeleety Ponies, or MA Ponies for short", began Eric, "The land I oreegeenally came from was a tundra/forest; ond some of eet began to collapse at a rapeed pace. Eet was very dangerous indeed, da"

"His power to fly amazingly was his saving grace!" added Derpy.

"I traveeled far weethout a rest", continued Eric, "I eencountered local predators from my native home that tried to eat me. They were White Wolves, Polar Bears ond Orcas"

"But even they couldn't take him down", interjected Derpy with excitement, "Because he flew high out of their reach. He's got guts!"

"I traveeled even fartheer ond fartheer from home", continued Eric, "I got coveered een frost ond bloody scars. I eestantly collapsed from eexhaustion onto a small islond near Equeestria. I leefted my head to see a small group of Alicorns standing een front of me and looking at me weeth concern. They used their greet poweers ond restored me bock to heelth. They suggeested for me to fly the country of Equeestria for safety"

"Yeah!", added Derpy, starting to shed tears of happiness, "And destiny showed itself to me and....*sniff*...I-I I'm sorry *sniff* I'm sorry"

"Eet's okey-dokey", said Eric kindly, giving Derpy a pat on the back with his hoof, "Don't keep eet eenside. Let eet out"

Derpy took a deep breath and began. "At the same time Eric was flying towards Equestria aftering being heeled by the allpowerful Alicorns, I was visiting Manehatten for a vacation. I accidently bumped into a numer of buildings until I feel into the most poluted area of the harbor. I was caught and trapped in black oil. All of a sudden, he spotted me struggling in the tainted water bellow, flew down and picked me up in his front hooves. He saved my life! He then cleaned me off in a a pet-grooming store, using a shower and soap to get the oil out of my fur. He then covered me in this blue and yellow-striped sweater. I never took it off"

"We became friends queeckly", added Eric, "We both then decided to spend the night togeether at a hotel that ees a free price, da. We found one near the eedge of the eeveerfree forest called Puma Inn. Eet was run by a trio of Pumas. While Deerpy here was lookeeng at the moofins ot the snack bar, I hod a higher truth to seek. I saw that we were going to be on the Pumas' next meal on theer meenu"

"We both out of their as fast as our wings could carry us. Eric's kind, however flies faster than Pegasus Ponies do. And so we came to Canterlot and Eric was seen as a unique specimen for a lot of the photographers their. The rich snobs didn't speak to him because of his accent, which is very very very rude! We have been traveling all around Equestria for a few weeks now, presenting The Great Mighty Eric and his amazing tales"

"INDEED WE BOTH HAVE TOGETHER!!!!!", thundered Eric, his voice suddenly louder than earlier, nearly shattering the crowds ear drums. "Sorry", said Eric in his normal tone, "Thot ees another abeeleety MA Ponies can do, incredibly loud noises, da"

Eric and Derpy then both took a stage bow and the crown began applauding them both, mostly for Eric. Eric looked proud and happy as they all cheered for him.


To Be Continued
Training and backstory.

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DarthWill3's avatar
That first test looks like it's a trial of skill or strength. Reminds me of Asajj Ventress taking down all those gladiators at the Cauldron in Clone Wars: Chapter 6. I wonder what the next tests will be? Tactics and strategy? Knowledge? Wisdom? Mental stability? Loyalty/commitment? Pain and endurance? Courage? Willpower? Usage of anger and hate? Technique/art in the heat of combat? There's a lot to go on. Remember that.

This is one of the rare moments Derpy actually shows intelligence. I had no idea she and Eric were that close!

Well done! Keep it up!