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The Great Breakout: Chapter 9

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The dark blue Pony just sat on a log as the old Bobcat thought of any way of communicating properly. Then, the Feline got an idea. He kneeled down and prayed to the Alicorns for him and the Pony to have a better understanding of Ponytalk and Gabbagonian. His prayer was immediately answered and he then spoke in perfect Ponytalk, so the Pony could understand him.

"Now then, allow me to introduce myself", said the Bobcat, "My is Moowongaki. I hail from the beautiful Everfree Forest area known as Gabbagon. I am outside of Gabbagon because I am hunting Geckos and then I ran into you. And who are you?"

"My name is Solarstreak", replied the Unicorn Pony, "I'm king of lost. I'm searching for my two cousins, to get revenge on them for ever sending me to prison"

"Revenge is no way to solve anything", said Moowongaki, "I remember, a while back, young Creatures back in Gabbagon often asked me for advice on so many things. The one who asked me the most was a young male Pygmy Griffin, named Griffalonius Von Masterton III. Does that speak to you at all, Mr. Solarstreak?"

"Come on, will you cut out the riddle-like talk?" groaned Solarstreak as he began to walk away.

"I can't cut it out", said Moowongaki, "It just grows right back, hehehe"

Solarstreak sighed and kept walking.













Meanwhile, back at the secret villain base, the six criminals were already planning their take over of Equestria.

"We will all split up", said the Black Orangutan, "We head in six different directions to lay claim to certain areas of the country. Once we reach those locations, we'll draw our team's symbol in the ground. The symbol looks like a circle with spike punctured through it"

"I can finally eat as many bystander Ponies as I want", said Sharka with delight.

"I can destroy all tile floors in the country", said Land Eel with a happy expression.

"I can get all the berries and smaller Bugs I can eat", said ToxoBeetle in excitement.

"I can finally kill my target, Zecora the Zebra. After I finish eating her, I will have constructed for a trophy, a striped weighing scale known as libra", said Ultracheetah.

"And I can finally be a queen", added Black Orangutan, "What about you, SplitPony?"

But SplitPony was gone, he had vanished in thin air. Then the group realized that he was out trying to impress Ponyville's mayor into liking him.











With SplitPony, he had already bonked his head on a tree to temorarily hide his split personality from the mayor. He was now sitting outside the her house, playing a guitar. The mayor opened up a window and saw him sitting there, the guy with the fire scar who apparently has strong feelings for her.

SplitPony sang to her:

Be my sweet, sweet mare!
I promise I will not give you a mad stare
Your fur being so sleek, makes my hindlegs grow weak
We can ramble romantically by the sea
I will also sing you a lovely symphony
You are very quite pretty, miss mayor of this town
I will even give you a lovely gift that is a golden crown!
Our love can be stronger than an ox
You are one incredible-looking fox!



The mayor just stared at him awkwardly.

"You know, Steven, that's a very sweet song, but I have much work to do. Bye!", she said, closing the window.

"Call me!" called SplitPony.

All of a sudden, he felt as though something was creeping into his brain. It was a telepahtic messege from the Black Orangutan.

"SplitPony! Get your carcass back here, we are starting to do our spreading-out mission", said Black Orangutan.

"On my way, boss", replied the male Pony, feeling his slit personality returning, so he galloped away, back to the base.


To Be Continued
Advice from a Bobcat, the plan and wooing the mayor.

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That is such a great breakout ever in the whole wide world great job on the story keep up the great work! :D:rose: